Today I made snowmans with a thermometer on it's belly.It had a scarf,a hat,and a snowflake on it's belly too.I had to put the pieces together.But there was something I forgot to add...A smile!I made it at school and there was a card to go with it too.I made this for my family,it is about Christmas,and to tell temperture for sure!I made the parts stay together with a special kind glue called tart glue.
Hender, you could have written much more than this. Why you made it? With whom you made it? What did you use to make it? Where did you make it? How did you make it? What happened after you made it? Always think about FIVE Ws when you are writing. But the last sentence is very good.
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